1st chapter of the series (in fact, it's a 2nd) was written from the sudden idea I got at that time, and because of the rush both protagonists' characters weren't well portrayed (part of it come from many readers used to attack me that my characters 'Didn't look feminine enough', so that time I forced myself to design them to 'Visually pleasing sight for most people' but it failed and quality dropped from my previous creations) . But overall it still looks good.